Composition(20pts): 20 Great foreground, middle, no background.
Contrast (20pts):20 I can squint and see really dark darks and light lights!
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 Good placement of emphasis in the rule of thirds intersecting lines!
Craftsmanship (20pts):20 Lovely, intricate lines.
Creativity (10pts): 8 I I like this very much as a last piece. I would suggest a monochromatic darker piece before it to ease into this totally different piece. Since your ukulele player is full body in comparison to your hands, I think your last ones should be bodies too. Just a thought. from close up hands to wider shot to this.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 A day early! kept workspace tidy, open to a variety of resources beyond the teacher
Composition(20pts): 20 Great foreground, middle, no background.
ReplyDeleteContrast (20pts):20 I can squint and see really dark darks and light lights!
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 Good placement of emphasis in the rule of thirds intersecting lines!
Craftsmanship (20pts):20 Lovely, intricate lines.
Creativity (10pts): 8 I I like this very much as a last piece. I would suggest a monochromatic darker piece before it to ease into this totally different piece. Since your ukulele player is full body in comparison to your hands, I think your last ones should be bodies too. Just a thought. from close up hands to wider shot to this.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 A day early! kept workspace tidy, open to a variety of resources beyond the teacher
98 - super job!