Composition(20pts): 20 Good foreground, middle, and background.
Contrast (20pts): 17 I can squint and see darks and lights but not much, I think it would have more of a background if it were darker.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 16 Compared to the piano hands, I know more time and effort would have made this stronger.
Creativity (10pts): 7 I love the feeling this evokes. Is there a way to make it more like the music is vibrating perhaps? This could be before the clarinet so that it builds momentum if not.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent! on time! 90
I love your idea and it is going to be a very effective and strong Concentration :)
Composition(20pts): 20 Good foreground, middle, and background.
ReplyDeleteContrast (20pts): 17 I can squint and see darks and lights but not much, I think it would have more of a background if it were darker.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 We know where to look :)
Craftsmanship (20pts): 16 Compared to the piano hands, I know more time and effort would have made this stronger.
Creativity (10pts): 7 I love the feeling this evokes. Is there a way to make it more like the music is vibrating perhaps? This could be before the clarinet so that it builds momentum if not.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): 10 Excellent! on time!
90
I love your idea and it is going to be a very effective and strong Concentration :)