Composition(20pts): 10 Hints at a foreground, middle, no background. The foreshortening pulls us closer, that is nice. Giving a floor line will help us to see where it is in space.
Contrast (20pts): 10 I can squint and see really dark darks but it is so stark its hard to call it contrast yet.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 Good placement of objects and figure keeping it out the subject out of the center usually scores better but all of your concentrations are like that so it reads well.
Craftsmanship (20pts):10 unfinished but accurate and it has a good feeling. The legs and shoes from above are hard to capture so well done. Needs more time of course.
Creativity (10pts): 8 I love the new direction you are going in general. As your pieces tell a story try for more expression along with depiction (as this one is albeit from an interesting angle) it will become even more creative I hope towards the end to tell a story.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): +5 kept workspace tidy, open to a variety of resources beyond the teacher (self starter in this series so good for you!) -5 late 63 - finish and resubmit
Composition(20pts): 10 Hints at a foreground, middle, no background.
ReplyDeleteThe foreshortening pulls us closer, that is nice. Giving a floor line will help us to see where it is in space.
Contrast (20pts): 10 I can squint and see really dark darks but it is so stark its hard to call it contrast yet.
Center of Interest(20 pts): 20 Good placement of objects and figure keeping it out the subject out of the center usually scores better but all of your concentrations are like that so it reads well.
Craftsmanship (20pts):10 unfinished but accurate and it has a good feeling. The legs and shoes from above are hard to capture so well done. Needs more time of course.
Creativity (10pts): 8 I love the new direction you are going in general. As your pieces tell a story try for more expression along with depiction (as this one is albeit from an interesting angle) it will become even more creative I hope towards the end to tell a story.
Classroom Ethics (10pts): +5 kept workspace tidy, open to a variety of resources beyond the teacher (self starter in this series so good for you!) -5 late
63 - finish and resubmit